I am pleased to welcome back award-winning novelist Dianna T. Benson. I love how she writes these scenes fictionally but conveys a host of medical details along with it.
EMS
Dianna T. Benson: A Son’s Tale of Traumatic Brain Injury
Medical Critique: James Patterson’s Kill Alex Cross 1/2
I am a James Patterson fan. I’ve restricted myself lately to the Alex Cross and Michael Bennett novels.
I just finished Kill Alex Cross. You can read my Goodreads review of the novel here.
This post is to discuss the medical aspects of the novel and what I find suspect. Come on, James. Hire me as your medical consultant– I think– no I know you can probably afford me.
In this post we’ll deal with a male adult that is involved in a motor vehicle collision. The character was driving a van at a high rate of speed and took a header into a bus.
Initial treatment of the victim was good. Jaws of life. C-collar in place. Suspicion of drug use based on dilated pupils– specifically PCP which is an accurate bodily response.
All good until this line: “The van driver was out on a gurney now, hooked up to a nasogastric tube and IV.”
Anyone know what is wrong with this sentence?
Simply put, EMS is never going to put down a nasogastric tube. Are paramedics trained to do the procedure? Yes. Have they ever in the field? Not that I’ve seen in twenty years of specialized nursing.
Now– a flight team on a long transport– maybe.
An nasogastric tube (or NG tube) runs from your nose to your mouth. It is used to drain/vent secretions and air from the stomach. If the stomach is retaining a lot of these things– it can impact on the patient’s ability to breath. A secondary use is as a feeding tube though there are many more comfortable styles (like a cor pak which is thin and flexible but doesn’t drain well.)
All this sounds very good for the patient, right? Why not put one in in the field?
One– patient priority is different in the field than in the hospital. It’s basically secure the airway, breathing and circulation and get on your way . . . fast. Placing an NG would simply slow down scene time and they can be difficult to place.
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There are also contraindications to an NG tube placement. One is a basilar skull fracture. We all have bones that line the base of our skull. If these are broken– there can be a direct conduit from your nose into your brain. Signs of basillar skull fracture are misshapen face, fluids (blood and serous drainage) leaking from the ears and nose. Mid face fractures.
That’s what we don’t want– an NG tube in the brain. Yes, it can happen as evidenced by the photo that comes from this article which discusses just such a case.
Really, James, call me.
Fall Call: Dianna Benson, EMT
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Dianna T. Benson is a 2011 Genesis Winner, a 2011 Genesis double Semi-Finalist, a 2010 Daphne de Maurier Finalist, and a 2007 Golden Palm Finalist. In 2012, she signed a nine-book contract with Ellechor Publishing House. Her first book, The Hidden Son, released in print world-wide March 1, 2013.
Author Question: Treatment of Car Accident Victims
Taylor asks the following regarding treatment of multiple victims of a car accident.
Taylor: Three girls (friends) were in one car together, on the way to a Christian concert. Drunk driver character had an argument with his wife about his drinking, denying that he has a drinking problem, then got angry, left the house and went out for drinks (doing the very thing they just argued about, partly to spite her and partly “to calm down”). He causes a crash with the girls.
Near Death Experiences: A Paramedic’s Perspective
I’m pleased to host Tim Casey as he shares some of his patient experiences with near death.
Welcome, Tim!
Over my 30 plus years as a firefighter/paramedic I witnessed many souls depart this world, but also had the privilege to participate in the resuscitation of hundreds of patients. I developed a habit over the years of asking the previously lifeless about what they had experienced while dead.
As I was generally the very first face they saw upon rejoining the living, once I knew their physical well being was stable, I would simply ask them what they experienced. Some had a story and some had no memory of what had happened.
Many other things can happen following this first procedure including intubation of the airway, administration of drugs to assist life and other supportive care. Not all patients regain consciousness but in the rare case they did and they were not intubated, I felt compelled to question them about their experience.
Tim Casey is a retired firefighter/paramedic with more than 30 years on the streets caring for the sick and injured. He has also written a memoir: Dangers, Toils, and Snares: Confessions of a Firefighter which has been number one on Amazon in the Kindle Store many times. Tim now
is a full time author and his new book on how to date a firefighter will be out later this year,
Gun Shot Wound: Dianna Benson, EMT
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Dianna Torscher Benson is a 2011 Genesis Winner, a 2011 Genesis double Semi-Finalist, a 2010 Daphne Finalist, and a 2007 Golden Palm Finalist. In 2012, she signed a nine-book contract with Ellechor Publishing House. Her first book releases March 2013.
After majoring in communications and a ten-year career as a travel agent, Dianna left the travel industry to earn her EMS degree. An EMT and a Haz-Mat and FEMA Operative since 2005, she loves the adrenaline rush of responding to medical emergencies and helping people in need. Her suspense novels about adventurous characters thrown into tremendous circumstances provide readers with a similar kind of rush. You can connect with Dianna via her website at www.diannatbenson.com.
Author Question: Car Accident Injuries 1/2
Author questions are some of my most favorite posts to do. How do you really write an accurate medical scene? Which injuries are plausible and which are not?
Amy is visiting and Dianna Benson (EMS expert) and myself (ER nurse extraordinaire) are going to tackle her question. Dianna will be today and I’ll be Friday.
Amy asks: I am putting one of my characters in a pretty major car accident — a rollover in which she lands on a broken window and ends up with a lacerated back full of broken glass, in addition to a broken leg, fractured ribs, etc. I need a scene to take place in the hospital where she is recovering. With those kinds of injuries, what treatments would she be under? More importantly, how exactly would she be laying in the bed? Obviously not on her back. But would she be on her side or stomach? Perhaps that depends on the other injuries she sustains… but the lacerated back is the biggest one I want her to have.
Possible injuries for both the side impact and the rollover: Again, every patient and incident is different, and I’ve seen it all—some accidents where based on the MOI patients surprisingly die and some where patients surprisingly live.
2) Air bag deployment: facial injures (soft tissue), labral tear (shoulder), etc.
3) Seat belt injures (chest injuries, labral tear, etc.)
4) Head injures
5) Anything flying around inside the vehicle and hitting her and boyfriend
6) Other possibles: knee ramming into door and shattering patella, elbow ramming into steering wheel, shoulder striking window., etc. etc.
7) Fractured femur or fractured tib/fib or just one of them (tibia or fibula) from twisting or hitting, etc.
8) Fractured hips
9) Fractured ribs
10) Etc. Etc. Etc.
A fracture is the medical term for broken bone.
Assuming the patent is unconscious when I arrive on scene, I’d verify she has a pulse and is breathing efficiently. If so, then I’d control all bleeding via wound care—sterilization and bandaging. I’d strap a C-collar (cervical collar) around her neck then extricate her from the vehicle onto a back board with padded blocks holding her head in place and strapped to the board. I’d splint any dislocations or suspected fractured (I don’t have x-ray vision) if not properly splinted via backboard. We do a ton of medical treatments and monitoring, but I won’t blah, blah, blah it all, especially since you don’t have an EMS crew on your scene.
Dianna Torscher Benson is a 2011 Genesis Winner, a 2011 Genesis double Semi-Finalist, a 2010 Daphne Finalist, and a 2007 Golden Palm Finalist. In 2012, she signed a nine-book contract with Ellechor Publishing House. Her first book releases March 2013.
After majoring in communications and a ten-year career as a travel agent, Dianna left the travel industry to earn her EMSdegree. An EMT and a Haz-Mat and FEMA Operative since 2005, she loves the adrenaline rush of responding to medical emergencies and helping people in need. Her suspense novels about adventurous characters thrown into tremendous circumstances provide readers with a similar kind of rush. You can connect with Dianna via her website at www.diannatbenson.com.
Author Question: The Pesky Reporter and the Wildfire
Charise asks:
I’ve got a forest fire happening and a news photographer out trying to get the best shots. She’s walking around recently scorched areas. Her car is parked on black top. It’s still pretty hot and smoky but she is there without an air tank so it can’t be too crazy.
I need her car to be inoperable but nothing too crazy like exploding. Is it possible that parked on asphalt, the tires would blister or begin to melt (but a person could still be okay walking around on the dirt)? It seems the way heat is conducted in the earth vs. pavement makes this plausible?
Also, I know animals flee a fire but do they get caught sometimes? Is it possible she’d come across a dead deer?
After she leaves the area, it’s normal she’d have some smoke inhalation problems? Coughing, hacking, etc? Does that require medical treatment or would she be left alone since she’s lucid and otherwise healthy?
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Decompression Illness: Dianna T. Benson, EMT
If you ever write a scuba diver character, a deep sea diver, a search/rescue/recovery diver, a Navy submariner, etc., you’ll need to understand Decompression Illness (DCI), a serious illness caused by trapped nitrogen.
SCUBA (Self-Contained-Underwater-Breathing-Apparatus) divers breathe a purified air mixture of 79% nitrogen and 21% oxygen. The longer a diver is breathing this mixture and the deeper he/she descends, the more nitrogen will be absorbed by the body. A slow ascent and a safety stop at about thirty feet for three minutes, allows the diver to efficiently exhale the nitrogen. Dive tables set limits for dive times and depths. Decompression Illness is caused by tiny nitrogen bubbles forming (instead of being exhaled) and becoming trapped in the blood and tissues.
General Decompression sickness symptoms:
Factors that increase the risk of getting decompression illness: Dehydration prior to dive, stressful dive or rapid movements during dive, alcohol intake prior to diving, flying too soon prior or post diving, not following dive tables.
As every patient is different, every diver will have their unique combination of symptoms and reaction to both the illness itself and the treatment.
Decompression illness is treated by hyperbaric recompression chamber therapy. Only certain hospitals in the word have a hyperbaric chamber. The severity of the patient’s condition and his/her symptoms will decide the length of time the patient is treated inside the chamber.
Nitrogen narcosis is also caused by trapped nitrogen, but this is a simple fix and isn’t serious if resolved. The diver simply ascends to a shallower depth until his/her symptoms clear. Symptoms include: An altered state of awareness and gives the diver an intoxicated state of feeling, incoherent reasoning and confusion.
As always, thank you for reading and for your interest. Please do not hesitate to ask if you have any questions.
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