And please– never, ever shake an infant.
For help in dealing with a crying baby– click here.
And please– never, ever shake an infant.
For help in dealing with a crying baby– click here.
Large head.
Can’t lift their head.
Eyes can’t focus or track.
Decreased Responsiveness.
Irritability.
Lethargy/Limpness.
Vomiting.
Decreased muscle tone.
Poor appetite.
Not smiling.
Not vocalizing.
And please– never, ever shake an infant.
For help in dealing with a crying baby– click here.
And please– never, ever shake an infant.
For help in dealing with a crying baby– click here.
Hello Redwood’s Fans!
How has your week been? Mine— ohh— I got assigned an editor and will start editing Peril this month. It is due to release in October. A nice scary read for autumn.
As some of you know, I am a real life pediatric ER nurse. Sadly, part of my job is recognition of child abuse injuries. April is Child Abuse Awareness month and this weeks series of posts will deal with the most devastating of child abuse injuries and that is Shaken Baby Syndrome.
And please, if you suspect a child is being injured– please notify someone who can help.
Have a great week.
Jordyn
Sally asks:
My villain is going to kill his wife. She has a severe peanut allergy. My initial plan was for him to put peanut oil in a salad dressing, one that needs to be shaken to combine the oil and other ingredients. He also damages her epi pen. He does this right before he leaves town for business in order to give himself an alibi.
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He’s a professional athlete so news of his wife’s death will make media outlets like ESPN. I want initial news reports to say that it doesn’t seem to be foul play, even though it is.
Does that work?
Jordyn Says:
The cause of death would be anaphylaxis. That’s how the person would die. Basically, an allergy causes a huge histamine release that can lead to cardiovascular collapse– difficulty breathing, low blood pressure, increased heart rate (tachycardia.) The reaction can get to the point where it can lead to death.
This is what your character would die from. So– the ME would be able to determine that the patient had an anaphylactic reaction. How easy it would be to pinpoint the exact cause of the reaction may be harder.
My follow-up question to Sally was: What’s to prevent the character from calling 911?
Death by allergic reaction does take a while. There is not set amount of time and my guess is it could be fairly expedient– perhaps 30 minutes for a person who is highly sensitive.
This is where the setting would come into play. In a city– the EMS response time should be 2-6 minutes. However, in the country where there may be only volunteer response, it feasibly could take 30 or more minutes.
The photo from this piece comes from a great article about whether or not to use epi pens.
Some free nursing advice for you here today– if you are a parent or adult and the thought comes to your mind– “Hmm– should I use the epi-pen?” Then yes, you should. Don’t wait. Don’t question it. Give it and either call 911 or go straight to the ER.
The issue with anaphylaxis is that it can spiral to a point where we cannot reverse the reaction and you may die. However, I’ve not yet seen a person die from giving themselves a single epi injection when perhaps they didn’t need it.
We’d rather monitor you alive for several hours than tell your family you’ll no longer be with them.
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Sally Bradley has worked for two publishers, writing sales and marketing materials, sorting through the slush pile, and proofreading and editing fiction. She has a BA in English and a love for perfecting novels, whether it’s her work or the work of others. A judge in fiction contests, Sally is a member of ACFW, The Christian PEN, and the Christian Editor Network. She runs Bradley Writing and Editing Services from her home outside Kansas City. A mother of three, Sally is married to a pastor who moonlights as a small-town cop.
Christina Asks:
I have a question relating to my most recent novel that I didn’t see addressed by you, yet.
I’m writing a YA Fantasy book, so while, so far, the majority of my characters are mostly human, they are not quite all so.
In my novel one character is from an alternate dimension. As a result of using her healing ability to heal a human male from a gunshot wound, she falls unconscious, for days. She’s human enough, that I would think that dehydration would be a serious concern.
When someone is comatose, is there any way to drip water down their mouth, or do you HAVE to use some sort of IV to give them fluids to keep them from dying. The teenage boy traveling with her is afraid to take her to a hospital for help because he’s afraid she’ll end up locked in a room somewhere as a government experiment.
What I’m not sure of though, is what he does to keep her from dying of dehydration. I saw a movie once where a sniper who was on the run used a turkey injector needle, some sort of kitchen tubing, bottled water, and I think sugar and salt to create his own IV after he’d been shot. Is this remotely realistic? If so, I’d like to use something similar in my book.
Jordyn Says:
Wow, Christina! What a great, interesting question. Thanks for letting me take a stab at it.
Dripping liquids into someone’s mouth does not work all that well. If they are unconscious, they won’t swallow it and if they don’t swallow the fluid, they won’t get hydrated. You can’t make an unconscious person swallow.
One– I will say– TV is not a great source for anything medical. For instance, the situation you describe in your e-mail where someone put a tube into someone’s stomach to drain its secretions by cutting a hole into it and inserting a tube– well, you don’t even need to do that to drain a stomach. You can put said hose down someone’s nose or mouth and get it into their gut to do the same thing. I know it’s not as dramatic but cutting into the stomach is dangerous because it will leak gastric contents everywhere– which erodes like acid.
Good luck with your story.
Hello Redwood’s Fans!
I usually post the Up and Coming segments on Sunday’s but in light of the forthcoming Easter holiday I’ve decided to post it on Saturday.
I hope you have a wonderful celebration with family. One of my favorite posts I’ve ever written was about Easter and what it means to me. Hopefully it can bless you as you consider the true meaning of the day.
For you this week:
I’m continuing with author questions!
Monday: Car accident with multiple victims.
Wednesday: Homemade IV solutions. Is it possible?
Friday: Death by Food Allergy.
Have a GREAT Easter.
Angela Asks:
I am an Australian writer of crime fiction novels set in SE Asia, specifically Thailand. You can read more about me and my books here: http://angelasavage.wordpress.com
Carol Asks:
Scenario:
Hero’s daughter is spending the night at the heroine’s house b/c he has to work. They think she has the flu but is appendicitis and is gonna burst [based on a friend’s kid’s experience ;)]. Heroine wakes up to hear her crying in the middle of the night. Goes to check on her and gets her roomie who is a licensed [but not practicing] paramedic. Says we gotta get straight to the hospital but hero isn’t answering phone.
So, they get there, but dad’s nowhere to be found. Heroine knows daughter’s name/birthday but that’s it [not even an address].
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