Author Question: Assault Injuries

Author Question: My MC, a 17 year old female, is beaten up by her father. He was drunk, angry, so backhanded her across the face, which knocked her into a bookcase. Then while she was on the floor he kicked her repeatedly with sharp-toed cowboy boots, though runs out of steam fairly quickly and goes off to his bedroom. (She managed to curl herself into a ball to protect her internal organs.)

So right now this is what I’m looking at for her injuries:

1. Mild concussion (from hitting a shelf with her head — this would also possibly produce a small cut/gash because the edge of the shelf is sharp.)
2. Bruising to the face (from where he backhanded her.)
3. Broken ribs (I have 3 for now — is that too much?)
4. Pneumothorax from one of the ribs — just punctured, NOT collapsed.
5. Crack in the mid-shaft humerus of her right arm (from being kicked.)
Lots of bruising (obviously.)
First of all, are these injuries plausible given the scenario?
Jordyn Says:

These are a “good” array of injuries that would be plausible as a result of this type of beating. However, you can’t have a punctured lung without some amount of air getting out. It may be a small amount that would not require chest tube placement but there would likely be some if the lung were “punctured”. That’s likely the only way the medical team would know the lung was punctured was by evidence of air on the chest film. So, it might be easier to just go with cracked ribs.

Question: Would she be able to drag herself a few feet across the living room to get her father’s cell phone (left on a table), then crawl out the front door to the porch (the living room is just inside the front door)?

Jordyn: Yes, she should be able to do this.

Question: What might she experience? (Obviously pain, but I would assume she would have a great deal of trouble breathing, get oxygen-deprived, light-headed, nauseated …)

Jordyn: Yes, great pain. Rib fractures are quite painful and inhibit a person from taking full breaths so the patient tends to take more shallow breaths to prevent the pain. This could lead to lightheadedness (as well as the head injury), increased breathing rate, and increased heart rate (from pain, anxiety, fear.) If you go with a more serious lung injury (like a collapsed lung) then this could lead to lower oxygen levels, increased work of breathing, and diminished level of consciousness.
Question: What would be the ER procedure when she is brought in by her best friend’s family? It’s a very small-town medical center that barely qualifies as a hospital. When she’s brought in the staff is already busy on a multiple-patient car accident. Would it be plausible for the ER team to keep her waiting for a while after they take her back to an exam bay? Or would they worry about internal injuries and get her x-rayed right away? (As I said, it’s small-town, so goof-ups are possible.)

Jordyn: It depends on her presenting condition. If she’s awake, alert and oriented and doesn’t appear to be in imminent distress (such as significant difficulty breathing from whatever lung injury you choose) then it is plausible for her to wait while the car accident victims are being taken care of.

An ER evaluation is going to include vital signs, a medical history and history of the event, and then targeted x-rays for everything that hurts. So, chest film and right arm films at the least. Her head wound wound be irrigated and stitched closed if needed. Staples would be used if the wound is in the scalp. Tetanus shot needs to be within five years. CT of the head isn’t necessary for her head injury unless she has a focal neuro deficit (like I can’t move one arm) or unconsciousness. Depending on the x-ray results– her arm, at a minimum, would be placed in a sling until pain resolves. A stable fracture to the humerus can’t be splinted– only placed in a sling. 
This is the basics any ER should cover. 
This beating is a reportable injury so if the police haven’t been contacted– the ER staff should do so.
Question: The way I wrote it in the original draft was that she was taken to an exam bay right away, but then left to wait for a couple of hours. Then she was x-rayed and because of the pneumothorax, was taken back to a procedure/operating room to be intubated. The doc and a nurse came in while she was being prepped, to tell her friend’s family what her injuries are. (Would they put a cast on her arm? At what point would that happen, before or after the intubation?)
And then, how long would she be in the hospital?

Jordyn: Intubation is not the primary treatment for a collapsed lung– otherwise known as a pneumothorax. Placement of a chest tube is. This is what is required to safe the patient’s life. If you intubate and don’t place a chest tube the patient will die anyway because they will continue to accumulate air into their chest– especially with positive pressure ventilation– the machine forcing air into your lungs. Usually, just placement of a chest tube is enough.

A sling to her arm as noted above.

And then it depends (as with all things in medicine) how long the chest tube would stay in. I would say three-five days at the shortest. The lung has to re-expand, it has to stay expanded off suction, then the tube is removed. The patient is watched maybe one more day to make sure the air doesn’t come back.

Author Question: Injuries Sustained from Physical Assault

Kara Asks:

I am a fan of your Medical Edge blog. Back in August of 2012 you answered a question for me regarding drowning for my current WIP. The information you sent and posted on your blog about drowning was invaluable and I made sure to save it in my research files for future reference.

That same WIP is now finished but as I am going through and tweaking the chapters, I’ve come up with one more question I could use your help with. If a woman in her 40’s, of average height and weight survives a vicious beating (from a much larger male) what would her condition be like when she wakes up in the hospital?

Currently, I have her waking up after being in a semiconscious state for two days, with a shattered left hand and wrist, that were crushed by being stepped on.  Some of the things she endured include –  being thrown against a stone wall, a slap to the face that sent her backwards, dragged across a dirt floor by her hair, several kicks to her side from a steel-toe boot and cuts and scratches from struggling to get away.

Jordyn Says:

Good to hear from you. Congratulations on being a Genesis

Regarding your question: I’m going to take each of the injuries you
listed and talk about our concern as medical providers and what
injuries what might be present.

1. She would likely be in a “semi-conscious” state if she received
blows to her head. So I’d include this as a mechanism of her injuries.

2. Being thrown up against a stone wall. Depending on how much
clothing she was wearing– bruising and abrasions. Could also have
lacerations here. A hard enough force will break bones so we’ll look at points of contact and likely x-ray if there is point tenderness.

3. Slap to the face. Bruising. A punch would be more a mechanism for
closed head injury unless she hit her head on something when she went

4. Dragged across the floor by her hair– you can get scalp injuries
from this– from hair being torn out.

5. Kicks to her side from steel-toed boots. This is actually the most
  concerning mechanism for injury. We’d worry about the organs underneath and the
injuries that may have happened from these kicks. You can Google
anatomy pictures to figure out what lies underneath. If it’s organs
such as the spleen (on the left) and the liver (on the right)– she’d
likely get some CT imaging to determine of these organs were
“lacerated” and to what grade.

You’ll have to be careful in the text to give a mechanism for each
injury she receives.


 Kara Hunt is a member of American Christian Fiction Writers (ACFW) and has been named an ACFW 2013 Finalist in the Genesis Contest in the Mystery/Suspense/Thriller category. Kara also semi-finaled in the 2012 Genesis Contest in Women’s Fiction.

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